YEAR LEVEL DESCRIPTION- Students create a range of imaginative, informative and persuasive texts including imaginative retellings, reports, performances, poetry and expositions.
Judging Standards
Use the Seven Steps for Writing Success to write a narrative.
Use the correct text structure to write a narrative.
Write a narrative using descriptive language.
Punctuate correctly.
A story including what you have learned based on the topic, 'My Teacher's a Monster'.
Must
Write a story with a beginning, middle and end with 1 form of figurative language.
Should
Write a story with a beginning including a sizzling start, pebble, rock, boulder and exciting ending. Use 2 forms of figurative language.
Could
Write a story with a beginning including a sizzling start, pebble, rock, boulder and exciting ending with a character wrap and 3 forms of figurative language.
Define the parts of the story graph
Plot the key parts onto the story graph
A completed story graph
What are the different parts of the Narrative Story Graph and what is their purpose?
Think about what information belongs to the different parts of the story graph.
Why do you think the structure of a narrative is so important?
Plot the key parts onto the story graph
A completed story graph
How has the structure of the video helped entertain the viewer?
Planning on a story graph.
An attempt to write a narrative.
Evidence of some editing.
Let's brainstorm some ideas to help you!
Planning- 10 minutes to plot your story graph as best you can.
Writing- 30 minutes to write as much as you can.
Editing- 5 minutes to edit what you have written.
Define what is in a sizzling start
Identify a sizzling start
Active participation
Think | Pair | Share
Do you think this is a sizzling start?
Brainstorm
What makes it a sizzling start?
What techniques have been used here?
Before and After
Is the second story opening better? Why?
What technique has been used here for the sizzling start?
Distinguish what a good sizzling start looks like
Participation in a group work and completed worksheet
What does a good sizzling start look like?
What does a good sizzling start include?
In groups compare two narrative openings.
What does a good one look like?
Write a sizzling start using one of the techniques
A sizzling start written from a picture prompt
What is a sizzling start?
Why do we use them?
Who can remember the different techniques?
What did we write about yesterday?
Who is the main character?
Are they having fun?
What are they feeling?
I am going to use the technique Start with Sound.
Who is the main character?
Are they having fun?
What are they feeling?
We are going to use the technique Start with Sound.
Write your own Sizzling Start
Who is the main character?
Are they having fun?
What are they feeling?
Share your sizzling start.
Quickly write sizzling starts using one of the techniques
Brainstorm backfill ideas for the topic 'My Teacher is a Monster'
Sizzling starts written from picture prompts
Active participation in brainstorm
You have 3 minutes to write a sizzling start for each of these images.
Share your sentence after each image.
Brainstorm Backfill
Let's brainstorm some ideas for the backfill; who, what, where?
'My Teacher's a Monster'
Plot Backfill
Let's plot the backfill on our storygraph.
'My Teacher's a Monster'
Create our backfill for our own story
Completed graphic organiser
Write a sizzling start from this picture prompt.
You have 3 minutes.
Share it with the class.
Let's review what we did on Monday.
Our class brainstorm and story graph.
Create your own idea for your story.
Complete the graphic organiser to tell me the backfill of your story.
Who, What, Where.
Share your ideas with class.
Write our own sizzling start and opening paragraph (backfill- set the scene)
A first draft of your opening paragraph with a sizzling start
Write a sizzling start from this picture prompt.
You have 3 minutes.
Share it with the class.
Using the backfill on the story graph, lets create a class example of a sizzling start.
Now lets write the backfill of the first paragraph.
Make sure to set the scene with Who, What, Where.