Recount
Letter Writing

YEAR LEVEL DESCRIPTION- Students create a range of imaginative, informative and persuasive texts including imaginative retellings, reports, performances, poetry and expositions.

Judging Standards

WRITE A RECOUNT AS A LETTER TO A FRIEND

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Lesson One | What is a Recount?

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Activate Prior Knowledge

Think | Pair | Share

What do you think a recount is?

What is a recount?

Lesson_1

Activity

lesson_1.pdf

Review

What is the beginning, middle and end of the hover bike animation?

Lesson Two | Beginning

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Activate Prior Knowledge

Think | Pair | Share

What is a recount?

What is the purpose of a recount?

Beginning- 5 W's

Lesson_2

Activity

lesson_2.pdf

Final Recount

Your final recount will be written as a letter from the point of view of you pretending to be Dohbert; recounting the sequence from the animation.

Decide who you are going to write your letter to. It could be a family member or a friend. 

Lesson Three | Letter writing

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Activate Prior Knowledge- Example letter

informal_letter.pdf

Let's discuss the structure of the letter.

The beginning

Does it include who, what, when, where, why?


Formal and Informal

Formal and informal language serve different purposes. The tone, the choice of words and the way the words are put together vary between the two styles. 

Formal language- is more professional. It is used when writing or speaking for official reasons, such as school assignments, reports, newspapers and public speaking. Formal language does not use everyday spoken language or contractions.

Informal- is more casual and spontaneous. It is personal and used when communicating with friends or family either in writing or in conversation. 

Think | Pair | Share

Do you think this letter is formal or informal? Why?

Let's compare

Do you think this letter is formal or informal?

What are the differences?

formal_letter.pdf

Activity- Sizzling Start, Backfill

In your writing books, set up the beginning of your letter.

Have a go at writing an opening sentence to your letter.
Make sure it has a sizzling start to capture the audience.

I will do an example.

Review

Share your opening sentence with the class.

Lesson Four | The Middle

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Activate Prior Knowledge- Sequencing

Sequence- a set of related events, movements, or items that follow each other in a particular order. (noun)

Activity

Lesson_4

Sequence

Divide your whiteboard into four. In each section write: First, Next, Then, Last.

Watch the animation again and on your whiteboards write in note form the order the events. Similar to how we did it when we read 'The Smartest Giant in Town'.

Be ready to share your thoughts.

Independent Activity

lesson_4_middle.pdf

Review

Share what you have written with the class

Lesson Five | First (Pebble-small problem)

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watch to 2:06

Main Idea

Think | Pair | Share

What is the main idea of the second paragraph of your recount?

What happened first?

Class brainstorm to fill out washing line

Supporting Details

Think | Pair | Share

What are the supporting details which help you understand the main idea?

Are these interesting? 

Do they give you a better understanding of what happened?

Class brainstorm to fill out washing line

I Do/We Do

Classroom Version

Write a version together of the what happened first.

You Do

Independent Writing

Write your version of what happened first.

Lesson Six | Then (Rock- medium problem)

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watch 2:06-3.09

Main Idea

Think | Pair | Share

What is the main idea of the third paragraph of your recount?

What happened next?

Class brainstorm to fill out washing line

Supporting Details

Think | Pair | Share

What are the supporting details which help you understand the main idea?

Class brainstorm to fill out washing line

I Do/We Do

Classroom Version

Write a version together of the what happened first.

You Do

Independent Writing

Write your version of what happened then.

Lesson Seven | Next (Boulder- main tension)

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watch 3.09-3:46

Main Idea

Think | Pair | Share

What is the main idea of the fourth paragraph of your recount?

What happened then?

Class brainstorm to fill out washing line

Supporting Details

Think | Pair | Share

What are the supporting details which help you understand the main idea?

Class brainstorm to fill out washing line

I Do/We Do

Classroom Version

Write a version together of the what happened first.

You Do

Independent Writing

Write your version of what happened next.

Lesson Eight | Finally (exciting ending/climax)

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watch 3:46 to end

Main Idea

Think | Pair | Share

What is the main idea of the fifth paragraph of your recount?

What happened finally?

Class brainstorm to fill out washing line

Supporting Details

Think | Pair | Share

What are the supporting details which help you understand the main idea?

Class brainstorm to fill out washing line

I Do/We Do

Classroom Version

Write a version together of the what happened first.

You Do

Independent Writing

Write your version of the ending.

Lesson Nine | End (Character wrap up/emotional resolution-sign off)

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Emotions

Think | Pair | Share

How do you think you would be feeling after all that has happened?

How can you write that?

I Do/We Do

Classroom Version

Write a version together of the what happened first.

You Do

Independent Writing

Write your version of the wrap up.

You Do